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What was different about it was the author ’s voicediscoveredwriting it in first person
using the protagonist 's voiceto influencethe writing in first person
my paper ... several will advise youto preventwriting in the very first person
However ,having discoveredwriting in the first person
Her writing style ... very character - centricleadsto writing in the first person
Academic writing ... several will advise youto preventwriting in the very first person
the earliest authordiscoveredto be writing in the first person
you understandto createWriting in third person
What was really an important moment for me in grad school wasdiscoveredwriting in the first person
to an Midwestern Gal 's writing an excessively long life storyleadto an Midwestern Gal 's writing an excessively long life story
a connection the reader , and to avoid ‘ buzzwords ’ if you want to stand outto createa connection the reader , and to avoid ‘ buzzwords ’ if you want to stand out
the reader up with the mystery ( a murder happening during Victorian times ... a mysterious candlestick ( the weapon used ) , an introduction to the main character ( a girl with the gift of sight ... and finally , a last sentence that will leave you wanting to read the first chapter as quickly as possiblesetsthe reader up with the mystery ( a murder happening during Victorian times ... a mysterious candlestick ( the weapon used ) , an introduction to the main character ( a girl with the gift of sight ... and finally , a last sentence that will leave you wanting to read the first chapter as quickly as possible
symbiosis with my narratorto createsymbiosis with my narrator
Half(passive) were promptedHalf
the ease of language and the connection(passive) is created bythe ease of language and the connection
a distinct voice for the charactercreatea distinct voice for the character
an intimacy with the character that I ’ve enjoyedcreatesan intimacy with the character that I ’ve enjoyed
a challenge to meet the promptcreateda challenge to meet the prompt
a manuscript from the first personComposinga manuscript from the first person
negativelycan contributenegatively
a strong connection to them as I told the story through their eyesto createa strong connection to them as I told the story through their eyes
a closer proximity between the characters and the readercan createa closer proximity between the characters and the reader
up the contrast between what he thinks is going on and what the reader can see is actually going onto setup the contrast between what he thinks is going on and what the reader can see is actually going on
too much of “ self ... self - description , self - contemplation , self - attention etc , in other words , too much of “ I ... whereas writing from the third person might create quite a big distance between the author and his own personalitycould createtoo much of “ self ... self - description , self - contemplation , self - attention etc , in other words , too much of “ I ... whereas writing from the third person might create quite a big distance between the author and his own personality
a distinctive slant to this talecreatesa distinctive slant to this tale
the reader to more closely identify with the narrator , but too many writers end up simply having the narrator TELL the reader what he or she is feeling instead of showing and sharingwill ... causethe reader to more closely identify with the narrator , but too many writers end up simply having the narrator TELL the reader what he or she is feeling instead of showing and sharing
a formal essay or columnwhen composinga formal essay or column
a fantastic front - page for my site that 's mobile firstCreatea fantastic front - page for my site that 's mobile first
a tone that is more personal , more subjective and more intimatecreatesa tone that is more personal , more subjective and more intimate
an over reliance on pronounscan createan over reliance on pronouns
better tensioncreatesbetter tension
the most distance between the author the readercreatesthe most distance between the author the reader
a blog that pertains to a specific , professional topic , which in our case is usually food or event - basedwhen composinga blog that pertains to a specific , professional topic , which in our case is usually food or event - based
an opportunity to place the reader directly into the storycreatesan opportunity to place the reader directly into the story
more warmth and connection with your audiencecertainly createsmore warmth and connection with your audience
StudentscreatingStudents
the audience to think she is both omniscient and criticalleadsthe audience to think she is both omniscient and critical
a more personal , informal tonecreatesa more personal , informal tone
to uncomfortable vulnerabilitywould leadto uncomfortable vulnerability
a more personal standpointcreatesa more personal standpoint